Hello, this is where I would like to ask you all to share criticisms of one another's RP.
Such as the quality of one's RP, the nation they have, and other things like that.
Here the rules:
1. Don't be rude. (Obviously)
2. Give legitimate criticisms.
3. If you wish to be critiqued, go ahead and post Critique Me in this thread.
4. Don't criticize someone who's not involved in this.
With that all out of the way, I'm proud to say let's begin.
Critique me! (Be gentle ><)

(Only post if your nation is sending communists wishing to be a part of or observe the talks)
After a long delay, the 40th Meeting of the Soltek Communist Party has arrived. William Locke is the General Secretary or aka the leader of this meeting. Numerous other important members are Roy Burns, Vance Gure, Ulysses Regan, and Tzarfir Yutan.
Tzarfir Yutan is the cousin of Edward Yutan, who ran away from home and joined the communist party, after realizing how horrible Edward Yutan was. Despite suspicions of him being a spy at first, he was proven himself as a loyal member. Tzarfir is the Minister of Foreign Affairs, where his main job is to meet with other communist parties and interact with them.
Ulysseses Regan is the General of the People's Army, where he controls the military of the Party, which is non-existent as of now, due to Yutan's banning of the party. However, the soldiers remain in the Sol Federation, awaiting the command of Regan's military genius when the Party comes back. Thanks to Regan, the Communist Party has been saved numerous times from sudden attacks from Yutan's military.
Vance Gure is the Minister of the Youth, where he controls the Soltek Youth, a organization supported by the communists to recruit childern of communists to prepare them for their joining of the party. Effectively, this gives him control of the party's future, however Locke has chosen him for good reasons. He has charm, intellect, and joined the party at age 10 after his parents were executed for going against Yutan.
For this, he earned Locke's respect, for his extreme devotion to the party.
He can be called somewhat of a radical.
Roy Burns is the best friend of Locke, who joined the party with Locke in 1999. Mostly a political philosopher, he studies the words of Marx and wonders how best to use them in the real world. He has studied successful and failed revolutions, studying how to achieve success with the Workers' Revolution in Soluske. He has no real position, but is noteworthy.
With all that all out of the way, the meeting can finally begin!

Yukhtritsist Communism

Mondtburg's Government structure is divided into four separate branches: Judicial, Legislative, Sovereign and Ecclesiastical. The Archbishop of Mondtburg is the head of Executive, Legislative and Ecclesiastical, while the Archchancellor acts as head of the Judicial branch to act as a counterweight against the Archbishop.

The Legislative Branch of Government consists of the Mondtburg Parliament, which can be dismissed at any time by the Archbishop who also has veto. The Archbishop's veto can be over turned with a 75:100 ratio, and the Archbishop's dismissal of Parliament can be nullified by the High Chancery. The Parliament is unicameral and has 100 seats, currently the party with the most seats is the Occidental Party, having 61 seats, followed by the Sovereign Party, having 37 seats, and then there is the Red and White Party, controlling 2 seats. The Parliamentary election will take place March of this year, however, so the political climate might change soon.

The Judicial Branch is lead by the High Chancery, which is led by the Archchancellor. The High Chancery is above 3 Petty Chanceries, Internal Chancery, External Chancery and High Civilian Chancery, which are all above the regular civilian court system. The Internal Chancery handles petty corruption issues inside the government, the External Chancery handles foreign cases, whether it is about Mondtburg Citizens abroad or foreign citizens inside Mondtburg, and finally the High Civilian Chancery handle cases that are too important for regular civilian courts, like treason.

The Sovereign Branch is headed by the Archbishop, who controls the police and the military.

The Ecclesiastical Branch controls religious aspect of government. This branch is headed by the Archbishop and the Bishops' Council, with Mondtburg's 5 dioceses sending in their Bishops or a representative. The Council decides what regulations should be put on religious institutions and churches. The Bishops' Council also works with the Ecumenical Patriach to decide the succeeding Archbishop should the reigning one die or resign.




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The Sol Federation is a nation deeply divided between fascists, communists, and democratic supporters. It is under the rule of Edward Yutan, the dictator of the nation. The opposition are the communists and democracy supporters. The two are working together to bring Yutan down. The Communist Party is under the leadership of William Locke, the General Secretary, and in exile. The party is in Fornoire, but wishes to save the people of the Sol Federation.
"We must liberate the proletariat of the Sol Federation from the fascists!" said Locke.
As of now, the Communist Party has about 80,000 members, but only in Fornoire. They're could be numerous in the Sol Federation living in secrecy.
Currently, they're banned from entering the nation, but they hope to end Yutan's rule with the democratic supporters. William Locke asks fellow communists and socialist states to aid them in end of Yutan's reign.
(If anyone asks, they are Marxist-Leninist, however since the whole topic is bit iffy, I won't say they are. You may have your nation react to this recent news.)

The King, Willihiam III, assembled the 50 most rich people in the Kingdom, some noble, some bourgeoisie, and few formerly lived poverty. They all waged a campaign against the Social Democratic-led government, who tried to raise taxes on the rich to re-construct Catherine and fund new programmes to alleviate poverty and provide free healthcare, education, etc. In his home, the Silver Palace, he spoke

"Greetings. It has come to my attention that you have all waged a campaign against the people"

"I cannot believe that such greed for billions still exist. We live in the richest times for humanity, where a middle-class Fornirian could easily live better overall than one of my royal ancestors. We live in a time where illnesses can be cured, and we see such illnesses like smallpox as painful, but nothing lethal, when, in antiquity, it killed even the most noble and royal. We live in a time where we can afford way more food that we should consume to survive, and the night is vibrant with activity thanks to electricity, where in more primitive times night's darkness ended the day's activity. We have come so far as a society, as a civilization, and as a nation"

"Yet, I cannot believe there are people still suffering in dire poverty, when we are in our prime in terms of wealth and knowledge. Every time I look at my window, seeing the poorer districts of Catherine from afar, I am heartstricken, saddened, and in distress, whilst I see my neighbors in their yachts in the districts closer to my palace, enjoying the majority of the wealth of all of our society produces. Such a small number of people utilizing the fruits of everyone just for their own gain and pleasure! It tears my heart to see such suffering amongst the populace, when a small elite enjoys prosperity never seen before in the history of all Artemia. I bet not even ancient Selenid emperors had such personal wealth compared to some of our richest men today"

"Your greedy ways consume society's resources, and you tell me you will not share the fruits that your workers produce every day, labouring light and night, only to see a small fraction of their produced wealth each month, struggling to survive? You earn millions more in a month than your employees will in a lifetime!"

"You have not experienced poverty. Only a few of you climbed the social ladder. Most of you inherited your wealth, making it grow even more, at the cost of the worker. To those who have experienced poverty: have you forgotten what you were? Do you have such a short memory? And to all: where is your sense of humanity, compassion, anything at all? If you were never poor, you may have worked endlessly to expand your companies, but you will never work as hard as those you call 'your servants'. Because I know that the rich in Fornoire do not even have the proper respect to call your employees what they are: your valued employees. You call them servants, some of you even call them wage slaves. I know that because I grew into this culture"

"Before embracing the people, I was like most of you: out of touch with poverty. But then, tragedy struck: the communist revolutions captured my home, Catherine. I actually thank that spark of discontent in Kumari, because I was forced into 3 years of poverty. I had failed to escape, and my family even thought I was dead. I experienced what it was to starve, and I was not accustomed to not being served by the servants of the palace. Hiding from the communists until the Monarchist armies came, I literally begged on the streets as a young child, always hiding from communist militias. At first, I thought they would kill me, but I was saved by Catherine's poor, who gave what little money they had to help me, and the palace servants who managed to escape gave me a home. I rejoiced as monarchist armies re-captured the capital, but that experience would scar me forever"

"In high school and college, I remembered those years. How I experienced what my family hadn't. I cherished the servants in the palace, treating them well, saying "please" and "thank you", not common amongst royalty or you. At my university years, I was sent to the Azura Silver University, the most prestigious university in Fornoire. Some of you have studied there"

"I was the successor to the throne, so I was enrolled in capitalist economics. What I saw was horror for me: The businessman made a huge profit from the worker, who received the scraps of his labour. How could it be fair, I asked?"

"I finally knew what made the people poor. The unfair businessmen, who took the majority of profits. I studied our legal system, and it was chaos. Barely any rights for the poor, the workers! No representation in our politics! Those poor people who selflessly took me in while I perished in the communist takeover..."

"When my father passed away, I grieved, naturally. But, as I was ascended to the throne, I saw a chance. And there, the Fornirian Revolution was born"

"I saw socialism as a trap, so I worked, and still do, for a fair re-distribution of our wealth. Social democracy. Yet, you are the main obstacle for progress. Will you never learn of the suffering of the poor? Oh, so help me, stop this! You have millions to spare! And you'll have millions still, even if we 'tax you to death'! Where is your compassion for your fellow man? Why do you keep on with this greed?!"

"We must strive for equal opportunities and fair care. I will personally advocate for free education and healthcare, so everyone can follow their desires. There is no chance for the poor in this system. If you are even human, you will stop this campaign now. I shall not have it. Even if I have to abdicate to defend the people, I shall do so. For your greed will consume our dear Fornoire"

"I hope you feel the sting of poverty one day. For it will be good for you. And you will finally see what greed does to our dear nation"

"Dismissed"

(The address was published by the Office of the Silver Palace, so your nation may react)

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